Advertisement Drafts

Magazine Advertisement Drafts

These are our first drafts of our magazine advertisement. The first displays the artist in the centre with the silhouettes behind and the text on front. This was our original design however after receiving feedback we began to make a few changes. For example where we had added the box below, it created more of a poster feeling to it. In addition the text wasn't matching.

We then made some changes to create the image below. We used a different colour for the font to make it more exciting and appealing to the audience. In addition we decided to make the silhouettes less visible by making them smaller and changing the opacity. We then deleted the black box so that the writing was clearer and less formal.  This suited our pop genre conventions because the writing was attractive to the audience and catcher their attention. However we still need to develop our advertisement because the fonts are not matching.