Final Draft

Final Draft

This is our final draft. I feel there are big changes from our last draft especially with the structure. We went and filmed some more footage in our local area to display the 'In my city' location. This is to highlight that the artist begins in her own city and gradually travels to the big city. We tried to display this by beginning with shots of the artist in the park, garages and bridge and then when the music says 'Rolling down the streets in my new town' we cut to the London location and the dancing shots. I feel this looks very effective and provides more of a meaning to our video in contrast to before when it was randomly cut.
We have also added in the duet at the beginning and edited the go pro shots we filmed. I feel these look very effective and provide a different aspect to the video. The use of costumes also looks effectively cutting between the different scenes. We have also tried to use faster editing in certain sections cutting between the dancing locations.

I feel to improve this we could experiment with more effects, perhaps changing the tint of colour on some of the shots. Also we need to refine the lip synching.