Second Draft

Second Draft

This is our second draft of our music video. After receiving feedback on our first draft, we needed to make sure we only included the dancing sections when all the dancers were performing correctly as well as continue to use inventive shots. They liked the change of costumes and felt they fitted with the idea of the piece. However they feel we need to structure the video better for example show the local city first and then move into London. We also need to continue to edit to the beat of the music and complete it to the end of the music.
   After reading through this feedback, we tried to take on board the key points and improve our video. Firstly we added in our new footage which was from the green screen. This provided with more variety when choosing which shots to use. We then tried to select the correct shots for the video and continue to use sharp, interesting editing. We also redefined some of the shots we used, for example only selected particular the sections of the dancing part where we were all dancing at the same time.

Even though we have made some more progress, I feel we still have lots to perfect. In some sections I feel the lip synching isn't perfect so we need to go back over that and refine it. In addition to this we need to finish filming. We need to film the duet and another section with the dancers. This is proving quite difficult as the dancers are busy at different times so we need to decide on one date and hopefully get this filmed. We can then work on displaying the story more by moving between the local and London shots.